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Jimmy Morrison hits an ace of persuasion over Tennis Victoria

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Year 4 student Jimmy Morrison with the men’s and women’s trophies from the Australian Open. Photo by Contributed

Jimmy Morrison has learnt a valuable lesson at school: the pen is mightier than the racket.

With an earnest desire to bring Tennis Victoria’s Hot Shot program to Shepparton, the Year 4 student at Bourchier St Primary School wielded his pen to craft a persuasive letter, envisioning his reader as a competitor.

Jimmy served up some compelling reasons for Tennis Victoria to consider his hometown as a target for the program, using precision of language that could not be faulted.

“The structural form was really hard because I had to make it really, really persuasive so that they would reach out to me,” he said.

“I started off with a good line telling them the absolute truth – Melbourne is at least or below 190km away from here.”

The key to a persuasive letter is a strong finish, and Jimmy sliced through any counterarguments with this one: P.S. Send the email back by tomorrow, or else…

“It made a really strong segment that would never be pulled apart,” he said.

“It would be amazing for them to run a Hot Shot program here ... but they didn’t do that; they did this instead.”

On Friday, November 8, representatives from the Australian Open caused quite a racket at the school, surprising the young wordsmith with the prestigious Australian Open trophies.

“I was really surprised and so excited,” Jimmy said.

“We had a bit of a tennis clinic at school, and afterwards, I got to meet them and see the Australian Open trophies.

“And guess what? I got to hold the men’s one.”

Cradling the coveted trophy with pride, Jimmy was astonished by its weight – 10kg and valued at $100,000.

Could anything be better than that?

“The school put a post on Facebook about the whole thing, and underneath it was a message from Tennis Victoria saying they just couldn’t say no,” Jimmy said.

It goes without saying that Tennis Victoria had met their match.

Representatives from Tennis Victoria “just couldn’t say no” to Year 4 student Jimmy Morrison. Photo by Contributed